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Post by Ashyver Sun Sep 21, 2014 5:06 pm

ASHYVER

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[Attributes] (Insert *'s in each category using the guidelines in the attribute topic)
Power - ****(*)
Agility - ****(*)
Toughness - ****
Intelligence - ***{*}
Willpower - *

The ()s indicate the times when Ash`s attributes switch, as specified due to Akuma and Tenshi`s different specialties.  The {} indicates the extra attribute, and where it will be distributed if I am approved for Level 3.  If I am unable to be approved for Level 3, I will make the changes accordingly.

[Basic Information]
Full Name: Ashyver (Surname Unknown)
Alias(es): Tenshi, Akuma, Ash
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: January 8
Sexuality: Pansexual

[Characteristics]
Height: 150 cm
Weight: 36 kg
Hair: Silver-White
Eyes: Golden-Yellow(Tenshi) / Dark Blood-Red(Akuma)

General Appearance:
Tenshi:
Akuma:
Ash`s appearance does not vary substantially from Akuma to Tenshi and vice versa.  The main difference between the two would be the contrasting colour of eyes; Akuma has dark, blood red eyes, while Tenshi tends to have blank golden yellow eyes.  The other change would be the guild stamp, aka the guild tattoo or mark, whose border colour changes depending on which consciousness is dominant at the moment and is controlling Ash.  Besides these few changes, Ash`s body changes very little in appearance from Tenshi to Akuma, and from Akuma to Tenshi.  

There are a few subtle physical differences, however, but these are mostly inside the body, and therefore not as noticeable.  Here is an example of one of these inner physical changes.  Tenshi is just as strong as Akuma, and just as agile, too.  In fact, she is more adept at fighting than Akuma.  Therefore, when Tenshi is in control of the body, she possesses extra power due to her specialty in physical attacks, in contrast to when her sister personality, Akuma, is in control of Ash`s body.  When Akuma takes control, her power is lowered just a bit, and her agility is increased.  These changes automatically happen if the two switch over.  There are other small physical changes such as this, but they`re not of a high enough importance to be mentioned here.

Now for physical appearance of Ash, which Tenshi and Akuma both share.  I will refer to their shared appearance simply using Ash, since that is what the body that they reside in is called.  Ash has a petite frame, and she is extremely short for her age, at around 150 cm.  Her weight is also very little, and she weighs no more than 37 kg after eating or taking a shower, that kind of stuff.  On an ordinary day, her weight is around 36 kg.  Ash has pale skin, and it sometimes changes a little bit with how the weather is outside.  She does not tan very easily, but her skin tone may darken a bit if the sun outside is shining down with all the force it can muster.  Ash`s skin will not burn from sunlight, however, because this (sunlight) is part of light magic, which is something she is resistant to because it is part of her own magic.  

Ash wears her hair in a hairstyle that causes it to flow out whenever she moves.  She pulls back to upper pieces of hair into a miniature ponytail, and this ponytail rests on top of the rest of the hair, which is left loose.  The hair in the miniature ponytail is gathered from the middle, which might make it look as though she has her hair completely loose from the front, because it is not pulled away from her face.  You may be able to see the clip that she uses to hold her hair, from the front, however.  It is a purple in colour, and sort of long and sort of wide.  Here is a picture of Ash from the back, where you can see her hairstyle and her hair as it lays flat.  
Hairstyle:

Ash`s clothes follow the scheme of a simple school uniform.  She wears a khaki jacket, with buttons down the front and a navy blue collar.  The jacket has pockets, which look like semi long navy blue stripes about a centimeter in width.  These pockets are three in all, two on her left side of the jacket, and one on the other side (right).  The sleeves of the jacket are navy blue in the inside colour, and turned up to reveal this.  They are buttoned with small silver buttons like this and remain that way usually.  Underneath this jacket, she wears a long sleeved white blouse, and the edges of the sleeves peek through, and one might be able to see them under the khaki jacket.  She wears a tightly woven straw cord bow as decoration on her neck, which is pinned to her inner blouse with a shiny purple brooch.  Sometimes, this brooch may appear to be more of a violet, with distinct reddish tints.

With her upper clothing, she wears a rather simple looking black pleated skirt, which reaches just about to her knees.  This skirt has an under layer of white, and the inside edge is trimmed with white lace.  Her attire for her feet consists of almost knee high socks, and black penny loafers, which have a slight heel.  Ash is always seen wearing this outfit unless she is in pajamas, or if she is wearing her outdoor or gardening clothes.  Ash prefers a neutral colour scheme, and therefore she will rarely wear colours like orange or green.  The only actual rainbow colours that she wears would be a shade of purple and possibly some red, seen in her brooch and on the clip of her hair.  The other exception to the neutral colour scheme would be when Ash is wearing her Magic Council Crusader uniform.  The uniform is a sharp crimson, and simply consists of the red jacket over the same white blouse and black skirt.  It is completed with the Magic Council symbol over the left breast, which replaces the pocket that is seen on Ash`s ordinary khaki jacket.  Her regular uniform`s navy blue accents are replaced with white ones.  Her Magic Council uniform is stored in her pocket dimension along with some other outfits, and she can requip it when she needs to be wearing it.

Personality: Ash`s mind is split into two different personas, and she spends the majority of her time as Tenshi. Ash is the name for the two consciousnesses combined, and there is no actual personality for ‘Ash’.  There is only Tenshi, and Akuma, both of which are similar in a way, but also drastically different in most perspectives.  The things the two of them share in general would be a dislike for inadherence to standards and rules, an uncomfortableness with those that are overly emotional, and an extreme love and obsession for fish.  Tenshi is a rather bland person, and she rarely will initiate casual talking or even any kind of fighting.  Tenshi isn`t particularly shy, and because of this, some people think that she`s not quite right in the head.  However, it`s just her nature to be withdrawn, and to only retaliate and never make the first contact.  She will hardly ever express emotions towards other people, but she can communicate with perfectly acceptable intelligence if need be.

Inside, Tenshi wants the best for people, and if there is someone that can bring out her emotions, she is very sweet and in all, kind.  Tenshi is not perfect, but she isn`t unnoticeable, either.  She can get fairly high marks in things that she does, and she is agile in fighting.  However, she doesn`t volunteer information, and she is more comfortable around people that adhere to the rules and ones that are older than her.  This trait of uncomfortableness with rule breakers is magnified a hundred times in Akuma.  However, she will kill, if someone initiates a battle where they are the ones introducing the conflict, and if they are the ones that are causing the fight.  Tenshi does not 'talk things out' unlike one might expect.  Her first priority is simply to send straight back any attack someone makes, but unlike Akuma, she does not go looking for people that are committing a breach of the rules or guidelines.  Despite the fact that she is the more kind of the two consciousnesses dwelling within Ash, she still upholds that emotionless exterior and inability to talk things through, which can sometimes cause people to say that she is the same as Akuma.  Despite how Tenshi might act, this genuinely hurts her, and Akuma is always amused whenever someone might say this.

Akuma is different than Tenshi in that inside of her, she has no feelings, but outside, she seems to have almost a slight passion and a drive.  Therefore, Akuma expresses emotions a lot more than Tenshi, even if the emotions are negative ones, like hatred or disapproval.  Akuma upholds all the rules, and she will make sure that everyone in her sight and not in her sight are adhering to what is her rules at the moment.  However, the ironic part is that Akuma doesn`t actually have an explicit set of rules that she insists people follow, and instead, she listens to a single person or small group, and forces everyone to follow their rules.  It is perfectly acceptable to kill someone if they`re breaking the rules, in Akuma`s view, and she almost considers herself a judge or a magistrate, simply doing her job and carrying out her duties.  Akuma doesn`t act crazy and scream that she has to kill everyone for breaking the rules, she simply will slip inside their places of residence at night and negate their life.  Tenshi will retaliate if someone attacks her or purposefully breaks the rules, while Akuma may inspect people and almost spy on them to ensure they are adhering to the guidelines.  Akuma is basically the same as Tenshi, except with a few traits magnified to be extraordinarily contrasting.  Akuma also despises Tenshi, and she is very cruel to her at many times.  She can make things hard for Tenshi, especially because of this :

The tricky part is that Akuma has the ability to access all of Tenshi`s memories, but Tenshi cannot see what Ash has done while Akuma was controlling her.  This has come up in the past, and something that has served to heighten the unbalance between the two of their power is the fact that Akuma can deliberately give up control over Ash, and Tenshi will forcibly take back the reins, so to speak.  Tenshi might end up regaining control right after Akuma has killed someone, and she could awaken to find herself next to a dead body that has obviously been executed by Ash, (signature mark of her abilities or such, traces of her magic, etc.) and she would have to deal with it somehow, without knowing any of the details of what occurred. Tenshi can do the same, but it doesn`t have the same effect on Akuma as it does on Tenshi, mostly since Akuma already possesses Tenshi`s memories and knows what is going on, having equal awareness as though she'd been there.  Either way, Tenshi is reluctant to allow Akuma to control Ash`s body, because she disapproves of some of the actions that Akuma takes.

Fortunately, neither of them can actually take back the body on purpose ordinarily, but if one of her consciousnesses is incapacitated, then the other may be able to struggle enough to take over.  While Tenshi is sleeping, Akuma can control the body enough to sleepwalk sometimes, which can also cause problems.  However, she does not have control to an extent where she can cause Tenshi`s eyes to open, or her abilities and magic to be used.  However, she can cause Tenshi to walk straight into a fire or off a cliff, and this ability is likewise only one way.  Tenshi cannot control Akuma while she is sleeping as the dominant persona of Ash.  Even though Akuma does all of these things to Tenshi, she never acts surprised about it all, and just tries her best to clean up the mess that Akuma has left behind.  However, if someone stresses her inadequacy at fixing the damage that Akuma has caused, then Tenshi may get very upset, and break out of the emotionless facade of protection from the outside world, that she has erected to bar her emotions from being let out.  Overall, Tenshi upholds the rules and makes sure people are following to help them.  Akuma forces people to adhere to the rules simply because they must, and she is not interested in their well being whatsoever.

Now for a few random things that every basic character app usually includes.  Akuma and Tenshi disagree on almost everything, but at in the first paragraph of the personality section, I explained a few of the major things that Akuma and Tenshi had in common.  We'll, besides those traits, they also have a few more similar traits.  For example, both of them like to eat fish, and they are both vegetarians.  Even Akuma, the one who kills mercilessly, is a vegetarian.  Also, they both will be displeased if someone states that vegetarians cannot eat fish without breaking their 'vegetarianism' or whatever it is called.  Both consciousnesses of Ash will protest against this if someone takes it to the next step and tried to separate the consciousness of Ash in control from the fish in question.  It will not end well for that person, I assure you.  Another rather amusing quirk of Akuma and Tenshi is the fact that both of them are surprisingly skilled at cooking, yet they could not arrange whatever they make for their life.  Despite their lack of artistic sense, however, the scrambled mess on your plate will taste absolutely amazing, I assure you.

Likes:

  1. Fish - Both Akuma and Tenshi absolutely adore fish
  2. Cooking - Besides being skilled at it, they also enjoy it.  Cooking is something that relaxes them
  3. Baking - Just as with cooking, both personas enjoy baking.  This is second to cooking, however, but nonetheless, it is still something that they like to do int heir personal time
  4. Light - This one is limited to Tenshi.  She likes to be outside, in the sunlight, with all the beautiful sounds and creatures
  5. Darkness - This one is limited to Akuma.  She enjoys to be underground, or inside, or in places that are dark, and largely uninhabited.  Which brings us to the next one...
  6. Being Alone - This one is not limited to either consciousness.  They both prefer to be alone in their spare/free time, although Akuma may go looking for people that are breaking the rules


Dislikes:

  1. Sleeping - Neither persona enjoys sleeping.  Even though they both understand that it is a requirement for staying alive and not undergoing memory loss, they don`t enjoy sleeping.  This is because while the persona in charge sleeps, the one hidden inside has limited control over the body.  Tenshi doesn`t want Akuma to have control because of the damage she might do, and Akuma is loath to give up any of her power
  2. Painting - Neither persona enjoys painting.  They both have a distinct lack of creative sense, and this makes things that are abstract, like painting, difficult for them
  3. Drawing - This is similar to painting.  Drawing is slightly easier than painting, but nonetheless, their creativity, or lack thereof, makes this difficult for them
  4. Reading & Writing - Reading and writing boosts your creativity, yes?  So some people might think it strange that Akuma and Tenshi dislike reading.  Writing is more technological and often not as abstract as drawing or painting.  However, they both would prefer to just cook, or bake, rather than read or write


Motivations:

  1. To Find Their Brother - Even though neither of them express a lot of emotions towards others, they both deeply love their brother.  He is the only family that they have left, because they believe that their parents died a long time ago in an accident (these memories are fake).  They are looking for their brother, and are determined to find him somehow
  2. Uphold the Rules - No matter whose rules they are, Akuma and Tenshi are determined to make sure that people are following them.  They both think that adherence to the rules is important, but Tenshi wants it for a slightly better reason.


Fears:

  1. That Their Brother Is Dead - Akuma and Tenshi are searching for their brother, and if they happened to find that he was dead, then that would be a worse case scenario for either Akuma or Tenshi
  2. That They Will Encounter the Traveler Again - This one is sort of complicated.  In the second and third parts of their history, there is a traveler involved, who is male and helped Akuma and Tenshi get into Earthland.  One of his rules was to not get involved with him again no matter what, and Tenshi and Akuma both agree in their belief that there is something dangerous about that man, and they never want to encounter him again.


[Life]
Occupation: Magic Council Paladin - Trainee

Family: Mother and Father, believed to be deceased, whereabouts unknown
Younger Brother - Now 10 years of age, whereabouts unknown (Although it is assumed he is in the Neutral Grounds, but Tenshi & Akuma do not know this and believe that he is in Earthland somewhere)
Technically, they are each others` twin sisters.

Medical Conditions: Amnesia (Explained more in History)

Pets: No pets currently - although at different points in their life, both of them individually have had pets

Hometown: Neutral Grounds - province & city unknown

Secrets:

  1. That Akuma and Tenshi used to be sisters - This is a secret that even the two of them do not know.  This remains unknown to them because of their amnesia, which is something that they have without even realising it.  Their brain automatically supplied fake memories to fill the blank space, so Akuma has memories from Tenshi and herself, while Tenshi has her own personal memories of that time.  They both believe that they were born like this, two consciousnesses in one body
  2. In general, neither of the girls like secrets.  They are both blunt a lot of the time, and they don`t appear to have emotions, especially Tenshi.


History:

[Guild & Magic]

Guild: Magic Council - Crusader

Guild Tattoo: Back of left shoulder, white with a shimmery border.  The border`s colour depends on which of Ash`s personas is controlling the body.  If Tenshi is controlling it, then the border is a shimmery blue colour, if Akuma is controlling it, the border is a dark blood-red.  The colours are similar to the eye colours of Léa`s distinctive personas; however, only in the case of Akuma.  Tenshi`s eyes are golden, while her colour is blue.

Magic: ReQuip : The Digital Assassin
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: ReQuip : The Digital Assassin is a kind of magic designed to be of use to both Akuma and Tenshi.  Therefore, it incorporates both elements of light and dark, and is susceptible to neither.  In reality, this magic is something that Ash has inherited from being born in the Neutral Grounds; the technological based ‘magic’ mixed with true magic, which is a deadly combination.  This magic is based on Tenshi`s agility, power, and speed, as well as Akuma`s control and rather dangerous aura that she sends out.  Most of her abilities are only affiliated with one element, but they are not weak to the other, unlike many other spells.  Tenshi`s spells are mostly physical based, and are designed for close range combat up to mid range combat.  Tenshi prefers to fight simply in retaliation, and will avoid making the first move.  Akuma`s spells are mostly ranged, or they`re attacks on one`s magic or mind.  Both of their sets of magic are combined into a single set, and all of the spells seem to have a quiet theme to them, thus hence assassin.  The only exception to this theme of stealth and avoidance would be one of Akuma`s skills.  When either persona requips a piece of equipment or object, it manifests in a sort of digital shards being put back together.  Here`s an example of one of Tenshi`s weapons, the Sonic Blade.  
Sonic Blade:
 The spell`s appearance will simply have the look of dark shards in Akuma`s case.  For example, it may look like Tenshi`s magic as it is requipped, except it will be dark and corrupted looking.

Ash`s magic also involves a fair deal of power, physically wise.  Despite her petite stature, as Tenshi especially, Ash can cause a great deal of damage to her opponents by simply utilising her basic attacks, such as slashes or blocks.  Combined with her high agility, Tenshi has high speed and deadly precision, which when mixed with moderate resistance and intelligence makes her a powerful asset on the battlefield.  One of the ironic things about Ash`s magic is that Tenshi`s side of it seems to be more of the throat cutting assassin`s abilities, while Akuma possesses the more abstract, senses altering and mind affecting spells.  The two of them do not often work in sync during battle, but if they did, it would be difficult to win over them if you were of an equal rank of one of the personas.  If they managed to work together, it`s not as though they would receive extra power or defence or anything like that.  Rather, the two consciousnesses overlap each other in a way that hides some of their flaws, such as range and attack type ( physical versus magical ).  This would not substitute for the tremendous elemental weaknesses, however, and either way, it is unlikely that Tenshi and Akuma would ever consider working together like that.  Even if they`re not particularly stubborn, Akuma despises Tenshi, and Tenshi disapproves of Akuma.

Strengths: Ash`s magic is susceptible to neither the element of dark, nor the element of light, while still being strong in both.  Also, Tenshi and Akuma have different specialties of magic, so it is strong in that it has a large variety, and is therefore useful in many different situations.  The magic of requip itself offers both Tenshi and Akuma a huge advantage.  Since their magic revolves around silence and speed, not having to drag a lot of weapons around is essential, and assists both of them in battle.  Akuma`s magic is of the element darkness, and it tends to affect the mind and senses, clouding a person`s ability to react and think.  Tenshi`s magic is stronger in defence, and she is adept at dodging, especially in close range.  Therefore, Akuma has a slight resistance to mind, senses, and magic altering magic, while Tenshi possesses a slightly enhanced dodging system, and her power levels are higher.

Weaknesses: Unfortunately, there is also the matter that Ash`s magic is weak to all elements besides ones associated with dark or light.  Therefore, she is weak to Water aka Wave, Air aka Wind, Fire aka Flame, and Earth aka Land, as well as the sub elements, including Ice, Stone, and Lightning.  The only exception to the weakness to all elements would be mind affecting magics, such as forms of illusions.  While Akuma is in control, because she herself uses a kind of dark senses altering magic, those kinds have a lesser effect on her.  Concerning Tenshi, she is simply skilled in dodging close combat physical attacks, such as slashes.  As far as actual requipping goes, it takes both personas time to requip, because they are not an overly high class.  This is a weakness in battle, where the user might need to attack during a split second opening.  For a more conventional weakness, one that is common to ReQuip magic, Ash uses more MP than others.  She must use MP to summon her holder item, and then also to cast whichever spell.

RP Sample:

Username: Seren

Face Claim: Kanade Tachibana from Angel Beats

Desired starting level: 3;  this is for plot reasons; because there are two consciousnesses in one body, they should have slightly accelerated and more complex/powerful magic, also, Akuma will be able to access levels 2 & 3 spells, while Tenshi can only access level 1 spells... 3 level 1 spells, 1 level 2 spell, and 1 level 3 spell? Correct me if I`m wrong
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Post by Ashyver Tue Sep 23, 2014 11:23 pm

Deleted my bump and rebumping this ~
I posted it as a done app... maybe you guys thought it was a WIP xD ~
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Post by Maxus Wed Sep 24, 2014 1:58 am

No, I was going over it a few times to make sure I understood everything, sorry for the delay. In it's current state I cannot approve this app.

You make it sound like switching personalities switches how the body they use Physically acts. That's not how split personalities work. They share the same body. It's just as strong and just as fast either way. If one mind is used to using it a different way, that's fine. But it won't change your stats one way or the other. If that's not what you meant by it, then okay. The wording just makes it seem like you're leaning towards stat shifting.

In your history, you state that this Neutral place defended attacks from Earthland and Edolas. In this universe, it's impossible for attacks to have come from either place.

As for the magic... there's a fair bit that's confusing to look at. She has technology that acts like magic right? That doesn't really mesh well with this universe, plot wise.

Like, how does this power allow Ash to create, maintain, and access a pocket dimension? Which is what Re-equip is: A mobile armory stored in a separate layer of space.

In addition to that, your idea of Light and Dark doesn't work. Light and Dark are conflicting elements, at least how we have things set up here they are. In a "Neutral" state, they're equal and cancel out. But in darker places dark magic is stronger, and in lighter places light magic is stronger. And justifying it by saying they're weak to every other element doesn't work because it doesn't make sense for Light or Dark to be weak to all of them. I can understand Fire>Dark because fire casts light, or Earth/Iron>Light, because they block light naturally, but all the elements? No.

That being said, I'm fine with different elements being used by personality swaps. Keep in mind however, the element of the magic used by re-equipers is based on the equipment they have out at the time. You don't passively get resistances or anything like that, unless the equipment you switch to has those abilities too.

As for your reasons for level 3. As far as I can tell in the app the two personalities are fighting against each other. That means the magic inside is split, never working at full capacity. If anything, that would mean that at any given time, Ash is operating at half strength.

Ranks 1-3 starting, in a general sense, can be broken up like this:

Rank 1: Just left home, has been out and about for about a month with little to no world experience.

Rank 2: Has been about for a few months, knows a little bit, maybe has a job with the MC or a guild.

Rank 3: Apprentice somewhere. Established guild mage, finished basic training at the MC.

Those are just examples of what those ranks mean in terms of experience in the world. Your app, judging by that criteria fits level 3.

Touch up what needs touching up, and you'll be good to go. You can PM me or track me down in the C-box if you want help/to talk about the changes you need to make. Bump when you're done.
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Post by Ashyver Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:03 pm

~ Please Archive/Delete This Thread ~
This is not because don`t want to make the edits of anything, but I just realised that I don`t like how I would end up rp`ing her, so I want to make a new character >.< if this isn`t okay, then I`ll remake Ash into something that is more enjoyable to rp in a way. But I`m not going to get rid of her, more likely, she`ll be my second character or third or something, because then I will better know the site and be able to rp her better, hopefully ~
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