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Shinju's Wind Magic
by Shinju Kobayashi Fri Dec 27, 2013 10:55 pm
- Air Bullet:
- Spell name: Air Bullet
Element: Wind
Rank: 3
MP cost: 25
Effect: Firing off a concentrated blast of air like a gun, Shinju attacks her opponent with a powerful blast of air. It is concentrated enough to hurt but not do a lot of damage, and easily throws an opponent off their feet. It travels quickly for a spell of its rank.
Power: *
Speed: ***
Area:
Extra:Ranged, Impact
- Speed Boost:
- Spell name: Speed Boost
Element: Wind
Rank: 2
MP cost: 15 MP
Effect: With a sweeping motion, Shinju manipulates the air around her to give her a startling boost in speed. With the boost, She can move nearly three times as fast as the already agile girl could before, though it is taxing, forcing her to concentrate on maintaining the ability. She loses the effect if anything would force her to lose concentration, such as being knocked unconscious or heavily distracted.
Power: **(**)
Speed:
Area:
Extra:Sustained, Targets Self, Buff
- Wind Dagger:
- Spell name: Wind Dagger
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Effect: Concentrating the air into a tangible blades Shinju creates a dagger made of wind. The blades are capable of cutting through flesh, though they are generally nonlethal unless the opponent were to bleed to death. The dagger is held as though it were a regular metal dagger.
Power: **
Speed: *
Area:
Extra: Sustained
- Wind Nova:
- Spell name: Wind Nova
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Effect: Creating a blast of wind blowing outward from herself, Shinju pushes her opponent(s) away from her a short distance, giving her breathing room to either attack or defend more effectively.
Power: *
Speed: *
Area: *
Extra: Impact
- Air Shield:
- Spell name:Air Shield
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Effect: Shinju creates a sheild-like barrier in front of her outstretched hands, able to block some or all of the damage from a spell. The barrier lasts only long enough to block the attack before fading away.
Power: ***(**)
Speed:
Area:
Extra:Defending
Last edited by Shinju on Mon Dec 30, 2013 1:56 am; edited 1 time in total
Shinju Kobayashi
- Posts : 19
Experience : 15
Primary Magic : Wind Magic
Secondary Magic : N/A
Re: Shinju's Wind Magic
by Guest Sun Dec 29, 2013 3:58 pm
Hey there Shinju. I am in charge of checking your spells today. Honestly they all look good, however, your spell, Air bullet. you say "It is concentrated enough to hurt if not do a lot of damage" the way I read this means it can do some serious pain, yet it only has one star of power, please either reword or redistribute your stars.
(could reword to something like, It is concentrated enough to hurt yet it tends to not do a lot of damage)
Bump when edits are made~
(could reword to something like, It is concentrated enough to hurt yet it tends to not do a lot of damage)
Bump when edits are made~
Guest- Guest
Shinju Kobayashi- Posts : 19
Experience : 15
Primary Magic : Wind Magic
Secondary Magic : N/A
Re: Shinju's Wind Magic
by Guest Mon Dec 30, 2013 1:52 am
Oh wait there's more...... You have it in the wrong font, I cannot read your text anymore, it is exactly 2 points over the recommended font size.
Actually joking aside, I just realized your wind daggers, well you seem to have the idea you can summon more than one of them. Well you COULD, however as to limit the number of summoned weapons like this we have the extra Multiple Projectiles. While granted this is NOT a projectile, you don't exactly say whether the blades are held in your hand, or magically floating around you.
To summon more than one blade I feel you should have that extra added on, if you disagree, please let me know via the C-box or some other method of communication. Again I apologize for not catching this earlier.
Bump when edits have been made~
Actually joking aside, I just realized your wind daggers, well you seem to have the idea you can summon more than one of them. Well you COULD, however as to limit the number of summoned weapons like this we have the extra Multiple Projectiles. While granted this is NOT a projectile, you don't exactly say whether the blades are held in your hand, or magically floating around you.
To summon more than one blade I feel you should have that extra added on, if you disagree, please let me know via the C-box or some other method of communication. Again I apologize for not catching this earlier.
Bump when edits have been made~
Guest- Guest
Re: Shinju's Wind Magic
by Shinju Kobayashi Mon Dec 30, 2013 1:57 am
Are you just trying to force my post count up?
Shinju Kobayashi- Posts : 19
Experience : 15
Primary Magic : Wind Magic
Secondary Magic : N/A
Re: Shinju's Wind Magic
by Guest Mon Dec 30, 2013 2:04 am
Now why would I do a preposterous thing like that. I am a good moddy mod that makes mistakes and doesn't see all the errors at once, yeah we will go with that, makes me sound innocent right? Good.
So now I actually think your spells look good, if someone spots a problem in them, which would possibly be from the vagueness in some, it will be easy to fix later though, but for now I understand it, you understand it, and we are all that matter at the present, so my gift unto you is......
So now I actually think your spells look good, if someone spots a problem in them, which would possibly be from the vagueness in some, it will be easy to fix later though, but for now I understand it, you understand it, and we are all that matter at the present, so my gift unto you is......
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