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Post by Eternal R. Blaze Tue Feb 11, 2014 1:09 am

Spell name: Emberfly
Element: Fire
Rank: 2
MP cost:15
Effect: The weapon of choice turn red with seal power. The user can then attack an target and, depending on the extra, cause different effect. If power by an range extra, say power then leave the blade in the shape of butterflies. These Flys will rush the target to attack them. When impact it can cause bruising on surface skin and, if with the Burning Extra, it can start small, shorts, fire. (Note: Only seven Emberflys can be summon, fire will burn out at the end of the inital post) If use with an burn Extra the attack burn the target at the impact area

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Spell name: Blaze Edge
Element: Fire
Rank: 1
MP cost:10
Effect: For the duration of the spell, the target weapon will get an fire like edge. This will add to the weapon power by the amount of * of the spell power. Depending on the extra use, it can cause burning on contact or be sustained.

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Last edited by Eternal R. Blaze on Tue Feb 18, 2014 1:07 pm; edited 7 times in total
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Experience : 15
Primary Magic : Celestial Spirit Magic
Secondary Magic : N/A

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Post by Eternal R. Blaze Tue Feb 11, 2014 11:52 pm

I believe that it? Unless i miss something this is ready to be check
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Post by Guest Tue Feb 18, 2014 6:10 am

Kay so it has been a while, I was giving ya time ta edit and I have been busy, so without further ado let me grade these spells for you.

All in all, not a bad attempt at holder spells. In your Emberfly spell though, if it starts a fire that lasts a post, that means it is the burning extra... just so you know. Now it can burn until the end of the post it was cast in, a quick little burn which would make sense with embers and all...

Edit that and you should be pretty golden.

Bump when edits are made.

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Post by Eternal R. Blaze Tue Feb 18, 2014 1:08 pm

Bump
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Post by Guest Thu Feb 20, 2014 11:23 pm

Looks good bud... thought I had sent the okay on this already... oh well... sorry about that.... You are solid. Just don't burn the place down okay?

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